Yo man, nice meeting you yesterday. Still haven't read your journal, but here is some advice after sarging with you yesterday...
You're an absolute approach machine. You'll approach anything, which is fucking awesome. No fear at all approaching mixed sets. You come off very normal and relaxed when you approach, not like a weirdo... which is good. When doing moving targets, you could start your opener a bit sooner so the set ends up right next to you, as opposed to behind you. It's a bit harder to get them to stop when they've already passed you, though you can still pull it off successfully. I think you have opening down though, and you could concentrate more on other facets of the game. You've spent so much time just trying to approach, you've gotten used to just trying to do as many sets as possible. but you could start focusing more on quality than quantity. You only need one set in a night to get laid, as opposed to 12 sets where you just open and eject. Though I'm almost jealous of how motivated you are with opening everything, it's a really good thing. But try to run more sets as far as you can. Like I said, even if you don't know what you're doing in a set, and you WANT to eject... just keep there and run it into the ground if you have to. You'll learn a lot that way. Maybe hit up bars or clubs more often, instead of street. Or really, just hit up EVERYWHERE. I know you said you didn't like how difficult clubs can be (like in Scottsdale), but I think it's really fun to have girls being difficult... and trying to get them to open up anyway. If this stuff was easy, it wouldn't be as fun to learn.
If you keep up with how you're doing, you're going to be one of the best PUAs out there. You're one of the most motivated people I've met. Good luck, and I look forward to sarging with you again.